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b e e k / s h a d o w
in my past life, i was an ascii d00d -- a very horrible one.
- 4:40 am, saturday, october 26 -
i'm awful tired, but hey, i got something like two hours of sleep
during the day.. maybe i should sleep soon. i finished the main
part of the song -- boy, it is sloppy. should i leave it like
this? donno. i don't think so.. :)
i'm 1:23 into the song, and i just hit the verse again.. hmm..
i am not sure how this song will turn out -- or if i will enter
it. luvk said i should. i must surrender to the will of luvk.
ow. that second chorus hit me like a brick. damn. i have to
change that. mixing. mixing! MIXING. geh.
i'll be back, don't you worry, i need to sleep right now, though.
- and then he went to sleep -
- 1:36 pm, saturday, october 26 -
mickrip rules. hmmm.. i've fixed some of the problems of this
song.. i guess i'll just enter it kinda like it is without
any major changes.. donno. it's not jazzy. how it place? i guess..
about.. 7th place. ouch..
i like the drums at the end.. they sound like they'd make a neat
drumloop.. :) doh. have to fix some of the transitions, and i'll
be on my way! honest! :) :)
- 2:00 pm, saturday, october 26 -
i've done more stuff to it. well. i really just feel like writing
while i listen to it once more.. i think most of the time
'working' on the song is spent listening to it -- that's not odd,
i'm sure the rest of you are like that too. hmmm.. i still don't
really like the chorus but theres not much else that i can do --
i'm kinda.. out of ideas.. ;)
i like the intro and the verse a lot, and the 1st 'chorus', but
the chorus i don't like is the one near the end.. you know what
i'm talking about. (the first chorus hits at about 1:47 or so)
i like the bassline. thanks luv for feedback of this song.. you
rule.. :) *adds luv to the f4 greets list* ok.. got it. :)
*sigh* this song is very messy in some sections.
- beek / shadow
beek@cts.com
chris hampton